Is the lyricist shooting for David Coverdale (White Snake/Deep Purple) or Lou Graham (Foreigner)? Wretched Song! It's almost comically bad - should be on the soundtrack for an 80's nostalgia comedy (during extended montage of hero getting into shape/building car/wandering around following painful break-up
Actually not that bad. Good sound quality, clean and crunchy guitars and a solid performance by the keyboardist. Definitely listenable, not "yucky", definitely not that. I hear much potential.